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Re: The Death Penalty.
I'm against the death penalty. I don't think that anyone has the right to murder another person, regardless of that person's actions. And I think it's hypocritical for a person ...
Sep 16, 2010 -
Re: Newbie questions
if you click the notifications link at the top, it takes you to the notifications page, and if you have any messages or other notifications, some of the words should ...
Sep 16, 2010 -
Re: Never let me go *Edited*
Hi! I like this poem. It's light-hearted and romantic and I think people would be able to relate to it. However, I have a bit of an issue with the ...
Sep 16, 2010 -
Re: Jared Leto Sketch
Thanks for your advice everyone, I've taken it all into consideration and hopefully improved my picture a bit!
Sep 12, 2010 -
Re: Favorite Bands? Or songs?
30 Seconds to Mars Alkaline Trio Slipknot Those are my three favourites, but there are loads more that I listen to, so I'll leave it at that. Music is everything ...
Sep 12, 2010 -
Re: What's your favorite ice cream flavor?
Cookie dough!
Sep 10, 2010 -
Re: I refuse to be weak
Hello! You use description very well in this poem, particularly in the first stanza, and that, linked with the emotion in the other stanzas, makes it pretty powerful. Especially because ...
Sep 10, 2010 -
Re: Addicts
I love this. It's very descriptive and personal, and I can see everything. You describe the emotion really well, and I especially like the way you ended it. I don't ...
Sep 10, 2010 -
Re: When Sleeping...
Hi! I quite like this poem, but there are a couple of things that distracted me from it. Firstly, the colour is kind of difficult to read. No biggy, it's ...
Sep 10, 2010 -
Re: Jared Leto Sketch
I haven't drawn anything in a really long time, but I thought I'd try my hand at sketching Jared Leto, the lead singer from 30 Seconds to Mars (my obsession!). ...
Sep 9, 2010 -
Re: Rolling Stones vs. The Beatles
The Rolling Stones. I used to like The Beatles when I was about seven, but I dont' get much out of their lyrics these days and that's pretty important to ...
Sep 8, 2010 -
Re: The things I keep
Hi! I really like this. I think it's very simple but it's still effective, and people will be able to relate to it. It rhymes really well without sounding forced, ...
Sep 5, 2010 -
Re: The Riddle of The Heart
Hey! I quite like this. You said what you meant in an interesting way and also made it not only something that you can relate to yourself, but relateable for ...
Sep 5, 2010 -
Re: Reviews! Look at the damage you have wrought!
Awesome. :)
Sep 5, 2010 -
Re: Groups Are Dead. Long Live Groups.
Woot! Blinking Cursor has both a group and a YWS page.
Sep 2, 2010
